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Berath the Faceless One



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Join date : 2011-04-12

Character sheet
Village: Rain Country - Hidden Rain
Rank: Kage
Elements: Acid/Slime, Earth, Fire, Glass

PostSubject: Berath the Faceless One (Finished)   Tue Apr 12, 2011 6:40 pm

Name: Berath
Nickname: The Glass Killer
Age: Impossible to tell, but he claims to be over eighty Two years old
Date of Birth: February 25
Gender: Male
Clan: Long Forggotten

Looks:

The look of this man is odd, he wears a robe of black diamonds, the trimming black, and the hood has a mask piece too it. Without the cloak he is a terrifying figure, his face seems to be completely gone, he has no eyes, no ears, no hair, no nose, no anything to be seen anywhere. Anyone that touches his skin describes his skin as sharp, hard, and smooth.His hands seems as though they were sculpted into existence as with the rest of his body as it seems almost as though he were a created being instead of a born being.

He wears a white silk shirt and black jeans when under his robe that seem to show he is laid back, but no one can honestly tell due to he rarely mingles with society. He carries a scabbard for a falchion at his side, the guard ornately fashioned and designed with dragons. And finally the blade itself is clear, nearly invisible, only slightly seen as minor light bounces off the edges.

Personality: Little is to be said of the man known as Bareth, he rarely speaks, he rarely goes into public, he tends to go off alone to meditate and commune with nature, and at times he completely dissipates from the face of the planet, no one is ever able to find him as he does not even leave a note.

Clan Information

(please post this separately in Clan Creation also please. your clan won't be approved with your character, it has to be done aside from this)

Clan Name:
Kekkei Genkai: Allows the users to change their body to glass or glass dust, become untraceable, their chakra is invisible and unsensable, and they can use glass element jutsu
Clan Symbol: Lost
Clan History: His clan history is all but lost as he remembers little of his clan from when he was a boy, all he remembers is his clan being all but eradicated when he was much younger. What is known of his clan is that they served the Amegakure for years as glass makers only, making proofing for homes or for other purposes with very little notable power. However, after a while, a few managed to come together to be ninjas, and in the rain country, they were fast and strong, their glass attacks nearly invisible in the rain. These people however were eradicated by the man who previously controlled the land, Nagato.


Rank Information
Rank: Amekage
Village: Amegakure

Skill Information
Skill Speciality: Ninjutsu, Needles
Main:
Sub:
Elemental Affinity: Fire, Earth, Glass
Special Characteristics: Made of glass, no organs anymore, runs off only chakra, self sustaining, Can use first seven gates, Capable of shape shifting without using jutsu due to glass body. Capable of using natural chakra due to his time with the Glass Golems. Is the host of the Five tails. Cannot die of age, but if he runs out of chakra, he dies, or if he is hit in his false heart three times he dies.

Jutsus
(please note: use the same template for every jutsu)


Fire Jutsu
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Ash_Pile_Burning
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Dragon_Fire_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Fire_Dragon_Flame_Bullet
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Dragon_Fire_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fireball_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Intelligent_Hard_Work
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Mist_Blaze_Dance_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Phoenix_Sage_Fire_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Roaring_Flame_Sphere
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Running_Fire


Earth Jutsu
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release_Barrier:_Earth_Prison_Dome_of_Magnificent_Nothingness
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release_Shadow_Clone
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Antlion_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Destructive_Rising_Rock_Pillars
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Devouring_Earth
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Double_Suicide_Decapitation_Technique

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Corridor
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Dome
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Dragon
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Dragon_Bullet
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Fist

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Flow_Rampart
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Flow_Divide
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Flow_River
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Flow_Wave
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Mausoleum_Dumpling
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Shaking_Palm
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Shore_Return
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Spear
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Earth_Style_Wall
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Hardening_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Hidden_Among_Rocks_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Hiding_Like_a_Mole_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Landslide
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Moving_Earth_Core

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Mud_Indulgence
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Mud_Wolves
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Mudslide
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Opening_Earth_Rising_Excavation
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rising_Stone_Spears
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Lodging_Destruction
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Pillar_Prison_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Pillars_Rising
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Shelter
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Staff
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Rock_Trail
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Swamp_of_the_Underworld
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Tearing_Earth_Turning_Palm
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Tunneling_Technique

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Release:_Wheel_of_Fortune

http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Mud_Needle



Name: Total Glass Assimilation
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank:S
Element: Glass
Description: This allows the user to use glass in any way he wishes, and even allows him to create more glass. Users of this technique always have it active. This technique allows the user to due anything he could normally due with an earth jutsu except with glass


Name: Total Glass Needle Absorbtion
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank:C
Element: Glass
Description: This allows the user to stab a needle into an enemy and the needle drains large amounts of the targets chakra at a time, absorbing one fourth of their chakra every five posts.

Name: Total Glass Annihilation
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank:A
Element: Glass
Description: This allows the user to create a storm of glass that shreds his friends and foes alike to the point of great injury, with possible glass shrapnel embedded in their skin.

Name: Total Glass Resistance
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank:B
Element: Glass
Description: Due to his glass body, he has become immune to any jutsu that is not C rank or higher of a jutsu, same goes for fighting attacks. This has a six turn lasting, and a cooldown of Five


Name: Total Glass Wasteland
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank:A
Element: Glass
Description:The entire set of earth around him for a mile turns to glass along with any plants that are near. This allows him to create spikes of glass, and allows him to use his earth jutsu as though they were glass jutsu.

Name: Total Glass Needle Storm
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank:C
Element: Glass
Description:His chakra reaches to any moisture in the air and forms it with molecules of earth and shapes them together to form fragile needles of lgass that shatter and create great shrapnel as it rains down. This his friends and foes alike. Radius of Ten yards.

Name: Total Glass Breaker
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank:B
Element: Glass
Description:Using his command over glass he can cause it to shatter simply by squeezing his hand, also using this to control any glass to move as he wishes.

Name: Ultimate Glass Eradication
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Rank:S
Element: Glass
Description:A massive amount of land is transformed to glass, two miles in every direction. The glass shatters and allows Berath to control it to his will. This glass can form floating platforms, flying needles, or swords. This jutsu lasts Six posts, and can only be used once per battle.


(You can also use Canon jutsu from the list also found in Character Creation)


Weapons
(please note: this template is for weapons that are unique to your character. Kunai and Shurikan are standard ninja tools and do not need to be mentioned apart from the amount of these items that you have)

Name: Glass Sickle
Appearance:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: The weapon is capable of creating whatever it touches to glass for at least six posts.
Origin: The weapon was made from the glass golems that inhabited the mountains he trained in, they gave it to him when his training with them was done.

Name: Cloak of Black Diamons
Appearance: The cloak is black and encrusted with jutsu enhanced diamonds
Rank: S
Special Abilities:The Diamonds allow him to channel his chakra through the cloak and see through every diamond in such a way he sees heat, motion, chakra, and even static energy. The Cloak allows him immunity to any genjutsu lower than S Rank, and any jutsu that hits him is partially absorbed to his chakra, and any attack that would cut him cannot cut him due to the cloaks diamonds.
Origin:This cloak belong to the elder golem of the golems he trained with, bestowed upon him when he defeated Gobi

History and Roleplay Sample
History:
Nothing is know of this man's academy days and little is known at all of his days as a Genin. He worked in a special Ten Man Squad group of Genin filled with prodigies of the Mist village. Each of these were to be of an elite group of this village, sad to say, five of them died in a S-Rank mission that was given to the large squad, but it proved to be too much for many of them, Only Five survived including the Jounin Leader, the Genjutsu Specialist, two Swordsmen specialists, Bareth, and a child known as The Scarecrow. What is known of his younger days is that The Scarecrow and Bareth were the best of friends, despite their differences. Berath was a calm child with a fast mind and quick reaction timing, he handled everything with ease. The Scarecrow, his friend, however was not at all like him, he was quick to act and was rash, prone to striking before it was time, but he was stealthy, which is why he was the Thread Master of the Mists.

While the how as to how he and the other four had become chuunin, all became the Set of Chuunin, known as the Mist Kings, together. But the life of a Chuunin would be short lived for the group, as none of them were really suited for the life styles of Teachers. So soon after a month they were all assigned as Anbu ops for the Mist village. While they were Still chuunin though, they met several interesting people. As Chuunin they managed to teach even the most inept people to become masters of their age groups.

In the Anbu, many of the Mist Kings lost contact with each other.The exception of this was Scarecrow and Bareth, in fact they became close friends and, in fact, rivals that everyone respected.They often worked in missions together and were revered across the land as the "Glass-Scare" Team of the Mist Village. There Years in Anbu were long as they went on more than one hundred missions each year, finishing all their missions in a short amount of time. Even the most difficult missions were speedy for this team as they were the best team in the village. This team would later become a special team under the command of the Mizukage, they became a part of the Seven Sworsdmen, and thus, the Mizukage's most trusted men.

Bareth lived his life as the best of the best in junction with the man known as the Scarecrow.But now he was working with men who where his equals. He and Scarecrow took time to get used to their new teamates, so at first they were solitary from the others.But, eventually they learned of their strengths and how to work with them. But a tragic accident occured one day, one of the Seven Swordsmen went haywire and attempted to assassinate the Mizukage, and after this, the Swordsmen were scattered, the Mizukage lost trust in them and after wards the duo of the "Glass-Scare" went seperate ways, some say the Scarecrow went to join the Akatsuki, but no one knows. and finally Bareth went to the mountains that were said to have the great Golems that his clan learned their glass elements from.

After two years of searching, He had found the Glass-Wrap Mountains that the great glass golems lived within.The golems ignored his existance for the most part until he approached the elder of the golems. After learning he was of the Stained Glass clan the elder said not a word. The Sage and the King of the Golems came to the room of the elder and took Bareth to the fountains of glass within their mountains.

These fountains were deadly to normal humans, and they took Bareth by force to the fountains and shoved him into the waters. If he was telling the Truth, he would become like a Golem, if not, he would never come out of the fountain, his body would have disintegrated. As he emerged from the waters, his skin became like glass, his features were smooth, his face dissapeared and turned into a perfectly smooth surface, he no longer looked a thing like his old self. But Bareth accepted his fate and bowed before the beings that had done this to him and they bowed in return out of respect for they had distrusted him. He was now like the golems, all rough features removed from his body, he was made entirely of glass like the golems, his heart, his brain, he did not breath, he did not eat, but his chakra system still ran true, and because of his clan's ability to manipulate glass, he could make himself seem more human if he wished, it was like everything in his body had been replaced with a glass replica of what he used to be.

The Golems gave him everything he needed for the journey back to the lands. But, problem was, there was no way he would pass as the man who had once been the "Demon of the Shredding Mists" so he created a new life for himself and he traveled to the land of Rain, where they were desperate for ninja.Before Bareth left the mountains, the elder gave him one of the Golem's most prized possessions, the Cloak of One Thousand Eyes. A clock that allowed him to see everything around him, and it also reflected genjutsu used on him. He traveled to the land of rain cloaked as a man whom many found and saw as a savior.

He helped rebuild and protect the village at a faster pace than they had in the longest time. He was promoted as a ninja of their village and soon he became the head of the ninja as he protected the village from many threats along with many the attacks that had come at them.No one was brave enough to be near him as he did this. All knew the danger of his glass elemental attacks, the attacks were dangerous, which was why he always met opponents a mile out of the village always cloaked in the Cloak of One Thousand Eyes. After fending from six squads of jounin from the land of sound, he was promoted to being the strongest of the Amagakure.

But rumors have begun to spread he has become a consort of the Akatsuki. The reason for this is that from time to time, a man rumored to be the Scarecrow is seen accompanying him to the mansion and then leaving guarded by the top ninja of the village. While no one knows if these rumors are true or not, no one knows. But there is one thing that is definately known. No one is brave enough to question his authority in this village.

It had been two years of Bareth being the strongest of the village, and rumors were spreading like the plauge about a Dolphin Horse-like being. Bareth took it into his own hands to check and found the rumors were true, and in a great cavern he found the beast Kaku sleeping. Bareth set back to his village careful not to disturb the great Badger. He gathered his best nin and they surrounded the shark in its sleep. each one set a scroll of sealing down, one for each tail, then one for the main body.

These scrolls unleashed a binding jutsu that with the help of Bareth restrained the beast long enough to drain some of its chakra from the beast. After draining the beast they began a sealing jutsu, it took three days to seal the beast and this time they did not have the help of Bareth and the golems of the Glass-Break Mountains. The beast writhed for the three days as it was being sealed body and soul within Bareth. On the third day it was finally sealed, but Bareth was left in a weakened state from the sealing jutsu. The Badger had fought the sealing and it had been difficult for Bareth to both continue the seal and to use chakra to bind the beast.

If not for his chakra orbs, all in that cave would have died from Goibe. After a month Bareth recovered and had more power than ever. But he was quieter than he used to be. Many people believe he is speaking with the Badger within his soul. While no one knows for sure, he was still without a doubt, the strongest of the ninja in Amagakure.

Over the course of the next few years he would learn to control this power. He has been claimed to have defeated the entire elite ninja of his village in a training match on his own. Another story says he has defeated several of the grass nin single handedly as he protected his village. But, while in all this it is shown that he never speaks. For the entire time he had been in the village, no one had ever seen his face...until one day...

One day it is said that a man managed to remove his mask, a feat that had never been done. To the surprise of all who saw him, he was faceless, his face was like polished smooth glass. The men of the village reeled in fear and questioned him were their true leader was and he finally spoke. He spoke his story to the men, the story of his being an ex swordsman and even told them his time in the great mountains of the Golems. This caused question throughout the village whether he should truely be their leader, but it was decided.

He was the strongest man of Amagakure, a village that is thought to have no notable power. But they know otherwise, they have "The Faceless One" on their side and this was a great asset. While he hates to fight he has been forced to do so many a time, and many have tried to fight him simply to remove his mask. While none have prevailed after the last time it is said that the man known as the Scarecrow has managed to a few times, but only the Rain villages know if this is true or not. This is the story of the leader of the rain village, the man known as "The Faceless One" [/color][/spoiler]

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This is an after edit of what Each Gate does to the body
The Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon), located in the brain. This gate removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles so 100% of their strength can be used whereas normally, a person can only use 20% of their muscles' strength to keep them from disintegrating. Unlocking this gate allows the user to use the Front Lotus.
The Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon; English TV "The Gate of Rest"), located in the brain. Forcibly increases one's physical strength and temporarily re-energizes the body.
The Gate of Life (生門, Seimon), located on the spinal cord. Allows the user to use the Reverse Lotus. The increased blood flow turns the skin red. In the video games, it allows the user to perform the Leaf Hot Wind.
The Gate of Pain (傷門, Shōmon), located on the spinal cord. Increases the user's speed and power. May cause muscle tissue to tear on use.
The Gate of Limit (杜門, Tomon; English TV "The Gate of Closing"), per above. Located in the abdomen.
The Gate of View (景門, Keimon; English TV "The Gate of Joy"), per above. Located in the stomach. Allows the user to perform the Morning Peacock. Opening of this gate releases such large amounts of chakra that it can cause nearby water bodies to form a vortex around the user.
The Gate of Wonder (驚門, Kyōmon; English TV "The Gate of Shock"), per above. Located below the stomach. Allows the user to perform the Daytime Tiger. Those who open this gate pour glowing green sweat from every inch of their body, which immediately evaporates from their own heat energy, creating an aura which people would mistake as a green chakra coating. In the video games, allows the user to perform the Eternal Chaotic Dance. The aftereffects of opening the gate are that the users muscle fibers are ripped to shreds, causing intense pain if anything or anyone touches him.


Last edited by Berath the Faceless One on Sat Apr 16, 2011 5:48 pm; edited 7 times in total
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Rank: Kage
Elements: Earth

PostSubject: Re: Berath the Faceless One (Finished)   Wed Apr 13, 2011 2:58 pm

Okay, starting from the top, you need more detail in clan information. I might be willing to forgive this if your clan template that you submit separately is more detailed. The history should be there even if its lost.

On to jutsu, if glass is your kekkei genkai shouldn't you have more jutsu involving that? Also, the Total Glass Resistance is far, far to powerful. You can keep the immunity as long as you give it some kind of weakness and allow him to only use it for a short time. (Not even Madara's incorporeality lasted forever). Otherwise you're going to have to make it resistant not immune to lower rank attacks.

Finally, the cloak of Black Diamonds, way, way, WAY to overpowered. Immunity to everything but S-rank and absorbs attacks to your chakra? No, no, no, no, no and a thousand times no. You can have the chakra absorbing on the level of say, Samehada but the resistance is no unless you can come up with a damned good reason for how it can do that.
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Village: Rain Country - Hidden Rain
Rank: Kage
Elements: Acid/Slime, Earth, Fire, Glass

PostSubject: Re: Berath the Faceless One (Finished)   Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:20 pm

1. Added more info
2.I added a few more jutsu and edited the resistance
3.Edited, only supposed to resist Genjutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Berath the Faceless One (Finished)   Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:48 pm

Well, I suppose I have no more complaints.

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